Spring, the best season

Giving examples

My favourite season of the year is, Spring. It is a time in which we can go out and have a nice day with a couple of friends. There are more sunny days; we can go for a walk maybe or took the dog out. We can also eat an ice cream or go to a cafeteria. I like this season of the year, because it is a period that we wear light clothes, because winter has already finished. The best thing about Spring, is that my cousins travel to Iquique for 2 weeks in September, so we share with our family and eat light food.

Giving sensory details

My favourite season of the year is, Spring , it is a moment of the year that I wait anxiously. I like because plants and flowers flourish and they keep a beauty smell in the air. We left basking by the shining sun, winter clothes we kept deep in our wardrobe.Couples walk in the park, as the first day. Spring is a season full of love.The ones that are single found his/her midst, there are more dates with the only purpose to be in a relationship for the summer. Spring has woken up from the nature that’s why I like a lot, it is the season in which we can breathe clean air and everything seems to be good.

Telling an incident

My favourite season of the year is, Spring , I like this season because it is my brother’s birthday .He is like my best friend, so in his birthday we stay together and share each other. I remember that one year my family and me were going to travel in September to visit our family , because they always come to Iquique so now was our time.We started the trip in our car we were very anxious . During the trip we ate snacks and we listened to music. But something strange happened. The car has a strange sound and we were afraid, we stoped in the middle of the road, and my father went outside and check the car. He saw that one wheel has a big hole, so we can not continue with the travel, we must repair first and then continue, but we were alone in the road, we do not have another wheel so we were frightened and afraid. Later my father found the way to repair that broken wheel, but it was something temporaly, we have to continue travelling but slowly. We expected to arrive in four hours but then with that horrible situation we spent like 10 hours in the car.

It was the longest travel I have ever had. All our family was afraid when we call and told what had happened. Wen we arrived, we were saved but that long and terrible hours in the road we will never forget.

{After producing this 3 kind of paragraph, I learned new things, for example how to connect my ideas and my senses but in different paragraph. I enjoy this kind of text in which you have to choose the topic. I like this season, so for me was easy gave examples , because it is something that I do always , and giving sensory details was easy too, because those feelings are the one that I felt, and finally telling an incident was more interesting because I have to tell something that I lived. In this paragraph I made less grammar mistakes, and I already learned how to use commas}